The begining of my story.

1941 Pearl Harbor, Hawaii

The bombs flashed as the japanese bombers drppeed them. the americans fired at the planes with anti aircraft guns but the americans could not stop the tide of planes. They came faster than lightning and befor the americans could hit them with the spray of machine gun fire they were gone in a flash. many ships sunk and over 500 sailers were lost. many planes were shot down, but it was not not enough. The planes flew away leaving a wake of destruction in their path. The japanese had won the battle. In this act of ofense they declared war on the united states of america and the americans joined the fighet against the natzi and japanese invation.

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3 Responses to “The begining of my story.”

  1.   jareds6h Says:
    December 18th, 2006 at 2:57 pm

    Hi Jake just letting you know a few things are misspelled but other than that its great! I love the way you put in all those comparisons and adjectives!(Sorry about erlier).

  2.   katarina6l Says:
    December 19th, 2006 at 11:24 am

    Jake,
    This is a great story so far! are you going to write more? Hopefully you do!

  3.   marial6e Says:
    January 10th, 2007 at 6:54 pm

    hi Jake,
    i really loved the story. My brother is in the navy, and he is based in there right now.

    Maria